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The Mario Mayhem Story!
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RE: The Mario Mayhem Story!
Cool, Nivlac is a master magician. Tongue
09-19-2008 05:24 AM
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Man, you are freakin awesome at storywriting! I wish i could write like that! how old are u, what year?
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anyway, can i please be in ur awsome story too?

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09-25-2008 10:02 AM
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Wow, thanks. I'm 13, by the way.
And sure you can be in the story. Big Grin
I'll try and get you in as soon as possible!

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09-25-2008 08:10 PM
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RE: The Mario Mayhem Story!
Mario-Man Wrote:Wow, thanks. I'm 13, by the way.
And sure you can be in the story. Big Grin
I'll try and get you in as soon as possible!
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wow i'm 13 too! geez ur good! anyway,thankyou SO much!

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10-01-2008 07:16 AM
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I'm doing next chapter tonight or tomorrow! Big Grin Promise.
My spelling is crap!

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10-01-2008 07:58 PM
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Mario-Man Wrote:I'm doing next chapter tonight or tomorrow! Big Grin Promise.
My spelling is crap!

Awesome!
10-02-2008 04:52 AM
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yayz lol, been a long time since I've posted on this thread Tongue wonder what my true form is?!?!?! Big Grin

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Mario-Man Wrote:Chapter 3
The game gym
Max walked up the path leading to the gym.
He was going to meet Mark again today, and chalange him..but he didn't know what was around the corner.
He came to the door fo the gym it oped swung open and a small girl banged into him. Before he could say anything she was away running saying to herself:'I can't believe I lost!' Max went inside. Max gasped.
Inside the fist room was tons of computers and consols!
Wiis, DS, nes, snes, n64, game cube, you name it!
Then he saw Mario-Man. He was at a computer and he was scanning a page. Max looked at what site he was on.
It was called Mario mayhem.com. Hmm Max had never heard of it.
Then Mario-Man turned round and saw he max. He stood up and walked over to the far side of the room there was a door there. He walked inside. Soon Mark came outl; Mario-Man walking beside him.
'Ahh, hello Max,' shouted mark as he walked over to max. 'Here for a battle?'
'Yes,' said Max, smileling. He liked Mark.
'Ok just into the next room,' said Mark leading the way.
The next room was fairly large. There was a large platform on the ground. Mark put Mario-Man into his master ball and jumped on the platform. Mark did the same.
'Ok, time for a battle, said Mark.
'Go! Slowbro,' shouted Max as he sent out slowbro!
'Go, Goomboss,' shouted Mark as he sent out goomboss.
Slowbro used Close combat! It hit Goomboss.
Goomboss used Big stomp and hit slowpoke.
Slowpoke used Pound.
Goomboss used Explode and he exploded into 20 small goombas. That took care of Slowbro but also took care of goomboss.
'Go, Snorlox!'
'Go, Big Boo!'
Snorlox used body slam!
Big boo used nightmare! Snorlox got stuck in a nightmare and hurt himself!
Snorlox is asleep.
Big Boo used Shadow punch.
Snorlox is asleep.
Big boo used shadow punch but it missied.
Snorlox woke up!
Big boo used charge power
Snorlox used body slam it hit hard!
Big Boo used charge power.
Snorlox used punch and Big boo was defeated!
'Go, Chain chomp!'
Snorlox used rest....
Chain chomp used bite and defeated snorlox!
'Go! Dugtrio'
Dugtrio used rock smash. It wasn't very efective.
Chain chomp used bite.
Dugtrio used earthshake!
Chain chomp used charge.
Dugtrio dig and hid under ground.
Chain chomp used charge again.
Dugtio popped up and attaked chain chomp with rocks he dug out.
Chain chomp used bounce and defeated dugtrio.
The battle ended.
'Awww man, I lost...again,' mutterd Max.
Mark was coming over when the roof started shaking. Then suddenly...crash! A man in black and green came in Laughing.
'Who the heck are you,' shouted Mark.
'Me? Why I'm...MR.L!'
To be continued!
(My hands sore from typing! Sad ) lol

i feel very sorry for your hands! Sad
also, i reckon that chapter was great! especially the gym, man i would love to even set foot in a room of consoles lke that!

lol, mark's pwning max coz hes using mario pokemons -
Mario rules all battles!

also to Mr.L, nice entrance!

also, maybe we should stop quoting the entire story! Tongue

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loly, yeah. Thanks. But the longest chapter I have ever wrote was 'attack at Timby city'

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will there be more mario-man? I miss your story Sad

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10-27-2008 12:58 PM
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