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a story of mine
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a story of mine
ok tell me what you think...

ok, one day mario and luigi where sitting watching tv but all of a sudden bowser's face appeared on the tv, shocked the brothers jumped up but where traped by gombas then they called in a chain chomp and carrige and they where taken away to bowser's castle. two days latter yoshi was thrown into the cage too. his eyes where shut. "mumma mia yoshi has been killed" mario sobbed. "no he is sleeping" luigi pointed out. "yoshi...yooooshi... YOSHI!!!" they both gentely said. "oh no he has been been druged" to be continued.

well it is my first story so be gental.
09-27-2008 09:37 AM
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a story of mine - buddhaman - 09-27-2008 09:37 AM

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