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Nivlac's Mario Mayhem Story
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Mario Jump Nivlac's Mario Mayhem Story
Since everyone else is making stories (Namely Black Dragon & Mario-Man) I've decided to make my own. Here's the cast (tell me if you want to change or disagree)
Goodies:
Timby
Shadow
Mr.L
Nivlac

Baddies:
Devil mario
Black Dragon
me_just_in
Wario (almost forgot about him! Tongue)

Unsure/Neutral:
mario-man

Now, about yoshi and TheYoshiCrusader, I don't want to be slack by leaving you out (school friends), but i don't want to be slack to the rest of the Mario Mayhem community by putting two unknown users in my story. So, if you guys make 25 posts, I'll put you in the story.

Ok then. I've written the first chapter starting with Timby and another person to be revealed later. I'll post the first chapter tomorrow.

Coming soon: Chapter 1: The first encounter

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09-01-2008 04:49 PM
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look forward to reading your story!

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09-01-2008 06:59 PM
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Ok, SINCE i have one reply, I'll post it now.

Chapter 1: The first encounter
It had glowing red eyes, glaring out of the misty darkness. A body could be seen, but only as a darker part of the mist. The only things that could be made out were a hat, and a pair of thick gloves. Barely any colour could be seen. There was a glowing substance all around it, or him. Whatever it was, it was definitely evil.
Then, it made a noise.
It sounded something like “HOO, YEAH!” then a long “YAAAAAAA!”
A pair of spiralling flaming dragons began soaring towards Timby, and before he knew it, he was running for his life. In the distance, he could see a green… something. It looked like a tall rectangle shaped like… a pipe. He decided to run towards it, and then hop in it. Just as he thought of this plan, a red object, shaped like a turtle’s shell, came speeding towards him. The flaming dragons were coming, the red shell was approaching, and the green pipe seemed so close, yet so far.
Finally it all happened. The red shell knocked Timby over, and the dragons were only meters away from him. Then everything froze, when the flaming dragons were only centimetres from his face. It all began to fade away slowly, until he could see a room. His room. His bedroom!
“Great,” thought Timby, “Another one of those freakishly realistic dreams again!”

Coming soon…
CHAPTER 2: Back to reality & the life and belongings of me_just_in!

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09-01-2008 07:30 PM
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very cool! More mario and less pokemon than M-M and BD's

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09-01-2008 11:14 PM
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yay i'm good for once
Keep em' coming
they are AWESOME!!!

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09-02-2008 12:24 AM
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RE: Nivlac's Mario Mayhem Story
Mr. L Wrote:yay i'm good for once
Keep em' coming
they are AWESOME!!!

Lol, I thought the same thing about being an evil character. BWAHAHA! *Ahem*. Tongue
09-02-2008 03:02 AM
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RE: Nivlac's Mario Mayhem Story
good story (another story? Now I'M getting out-done)

I like the sound of the chapters, cool.

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09-02-2008 03:41 AM
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hehe I do have freakishly realistic dreams @[email protected] Keep it coming mate!

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09-02-2008 03:49 AM
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Timby as seen a book. Timby there are two other stories about mariomayhem.com (mine and BD's)

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09-02-2008 03:51 AM
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RE: Nivlac's Mario Mayhem Story
I have been reading them Big Grin just slow to reply. Man it's 4am, I should be in bed @[email protected]

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