So there I am in class with the teacher blabbing on about something I don't care about. I look to Jake, who's making fart noises. I look to Caleb, who is sleeping, and then I look to Jacob, who is doodling something from Halo. All of a sudden, Bowser crashes through the wall in his flying thingamajig. He snatches my friends and starts to fly off. I grab onto the back and stay quiet. The teacher still blabbing and comepletly oblivious of the situation, turns to see the gaping hole in the wall. She looks surprised. Back at the flying thing, I'm still holding on for life. I start to loose my grip. Bowser goes into a portal up in the sky. Right after we go through, I fall. I smash into the ground. Get up and say, "Well, the Mushroom Kingdom looks nice." I find a letter on the ground. It reads: "Dear Justin, I'm-a sorry that I cannot-a save your friends. I'm-a on a vacation with Luigi, Peach, Daisy, And Yoshi.


Sincerely; Mario"
"Well how does Mario know my friends were kidnapped without Bowser telling him? I guess word goes around fast in the Mushoom Kingdom." I say putting the note in my pocket. A Goomba comes by. I stomp it.
"Sweet. I love this world! The first thing that's actualy smaller than me." I say just as a Koopa comes. I stomp it and pick up the shell.
"Hmm. I guess my dream came true, I AM being like Mario!" I start "Level 1"
With a pause, I say: "Where's the music to go with it?" The music starts.
"SWEET!" I say. I start running forward. I find a group of Goombas walking towards me. I stomp them all. Then, the Koopa shell in my hand starts shaking violently. I whip it at another Koopa that was justing coming. A Koopa pops out of his shell looking quite angry. I jump on him again and drop his shell off a cliff.
"Heh heh heh heh. That otta take care of you. Hey look the flag!"
I say. I then run up to the flag.
"Crap. Can't- reach- flag! Oh there's the wire" I say pulling the flag down. I then walk into the building. There's a warp pipe in it.
"AWESOME!! A warp pipe!!" I jump into it. I only fall down and slide
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!" I scream sliding down doing loops in the pipe. Next thing. I shoot out of the next pipe. The city turned into the countryside. It was evening there. Off in the distance, I see a small village of Toad. Once I got there, a Toad came up and said
"Who are you?" I then say,
"I'm Justin, I'm here to save my friends. Suprisingly, Mario didn't come to the rescue." The Toad then says,
"Bowser came by and told us he took your friends PLUS Peach, Mario, Luigi, Daisy, and Yoshi!" I looked suprised.
"I thought Mario was on vacation! He told me so!" I said.
"No, BOWSER left that letter there. He knew that you got on. He tossed it once you smashed into the ground." The Toad explained.
"You are our only hope. We will train you. But first, food." He explained.
"Yeah, I'll have tortilla chips with sauce. No chunks please." I said.
"Tortilla? Chips? What are those?" The Toad asked. I gasp.
"You don't know what tortilla chips are!?" I say. The Toad shook his head.
"They're tasty chips that are all spicy, sorta. The sauce makes them spicy. I bet Mario would know what they are." I explained. The Toad looked even more confused.
"Well, what do you have to eat?" I asked.
"We have Macaro-"
"I'll take that!" I interrupted. The Toad led me into a hut. A Toadette was at the stove cooking. She turned around. She looked to the Toad, then me. She looked puzzled when she saw me.
"Who are you?" She asked me.
"I'm Justin here to sa-" I got interrupted.
"Defeat Bowser." The Toad said.
"Oh." The Toadette replied. She slid three bowls onto a table. Then filled them with awesome looking macaroni and cheese. The Toad didn't look very interested in eating it. I took a spoon and tried a bite. My eyes widened. Then I took another, then another. Until I was wolfing it down. Still the Toad didn't like the mac and cheese.
"Come on honey, eat it. Look at Justin completely wolfing it down." The Toadette said.
"Hmmm?" I said through mac and cheese looking up.
"So, Justin, how old are you?" The Toadette asked.
"Eleven, ma'am." I replied with mac and cheese muffling it.
"And you?" I asked.
"Twenty-two." The Toadette replied.
"Twenty-seven." The Toad replied.
"Married?" I asked.
"Yep. for two years. All has gone well so far." The Toad said.
"Good, good." I say.
"Alrighty then.. Let's begin training." The Toad said. We went outside.
"Now, tell me what you know."
"I aim for the mushrooms, fire flowers, stars, One-ups, Tanooki suit, Frog suit, aaand the Super Leaf." I said.
"Ok, all you need is agility training and fighting training. Oh, and getting used to the mushrooms." The Toad said. He handed me a Super Mushroom. I take a bite, I suddenly grow bigger.
"SWEET! I love being big! I'm like, FIVE feet now! I'm not puny anymore!! Woo!" I said. I jumped, I went about 7 feet.
"WOOO!!! I FEEL AWESOME!!! But I don't know if these are drugs."
"DRUGS??? If Mario did drugs, would you think he'd be with the princess??" The Toad said.
"Oh, right. You got a point there." I said.
"Well, the training was short, but I think you're good to go." The Toad said.
"What about fighting?" I said.
"Oh, right, here, punch this." The Toad put a dummy made out of hay in front of me. I punched a gaping hole through it. My eyes widened. I looked at my fist.
".....Wow." I said. The Toad gave me the ok and pointed to a warp pipe.
"It looks like I'm off. Seeyas. I'll be back." I said holding my breath and jumping into the pipe, I slid down for what seemed like forever, but I ended up shooting up and out of the pipe into "Level 2" Three Goombas come.Remember training, remember training I think. I jump on each of them. Two Koopas come. I stomp one, pick up the shell, and throw it at the other, I jump to avoid the shell coming at me. I jump over some blocks, I then see a Hammer Bro staring at me. My eyes widen and he throws a hammer at me *Insert punch noise* I suddenly shink.
"HEY THAT WAS MY FIRST SHROOM!! I'LL KILL YOU!!!" I then stomp the Hammer Bro. He falls. I continue.
"Ohhh blocks!" I say. I bash one, a star flies out. I touch it, the sweet, sweet music starts. I run through six Goombas, four Koopas, and I beat down two Hammer Bros. The music stops.
"Well that was fun!" I said excitedly. There was the flagpole, I jump right to the top. I go into the castle. Another warp pipe, I jump into it. Right after I come out of another one underground.
"AaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!" I scream falling from the pipe, I smash to the ground. I get up.
"How did I survive that?" I ask. There was five boxes. I bash the first one, a shroom comes out, I grab it. I grow bigger. I start running.
"Where's all the enemies?" I ask looking around the dank cave.
"At least I have the music to keep me motivated." I say. All of a sudden, a bat flies right into me. My eyes widen to see more coming right at my face. I duck, I get up to realise I'm smaller. I start walking, I then fall. *Lost life music*
"WOAH, how come I didn't see that??? I just hope someone's using a Game Genie." I say, I fall again, this time, I run as fast as I can, the bats come, I stomp them all. Two Goombas come. I jump on them, one of those black shell thingys come, I stomp it. I pick up the shell, eight Goombas come by, I kick the shell at them, All of then get smashed out of the way. *1-Up sound*
"Sweet! One-Up!" I say, two Koopas come, two red-shelled ones. One tries to grab me, I dodge him and stomp him, kick the shell at the other one and run on, a second pipe came up. I jumped up it. I then got to the staircase to the flag. I jump up it, I jump and get the flag. Warp pipe time! I jump into it, I jump out. The first castle comes. I go in. The castle has a high ceiling. I look all around. Lava everywhere. I walk forward, looking around mesmerized.
"Wooooaaahhh, I didn't know that Koopa had good builders!" I say. A boomerang bro stands on a rock floating in the lava. He throws a boomerang at me. I duck to dodge it, above, there's a block. I bash it. A fire flower comes up . I touch it. I turn into a fire-hurling Justin. I whip a fireball at the Boomerang Bro. He dies. I jump on the rock, then jump to the next, to the next, and to the next with amazing agility. I then hop onto the normal floor. I run, and there, stands Bowser Jr. I run forward. He charges into me. I lose the fire flower.
"I guess I'm gonna have to use my fists." I throw a punch at Bowser Jr. Nail him right in the nose. Amazingly, he flies backwards. He takes out a Koopa shell, then whips it at me, I jump on it, pick it up, and throw it at him. He falls over, I stomp him. He gets up, grabs me. And throws me back. I almost slid into the lava! I get up. Run for Bowser Jr. Grab him in the arm. Swing him around, and around, and around, and around. I let go, he flies into the lava. He burns
"That DOES seem a bit brutal there, but, like they say, 'no mercy for the Koopas'."
I say. I walk into the chamber *castle ending music* Caleb is standing there.
"Thanks, Justin! You saved me!" He says. All of a sudden, a blue portal opens up.
"I'd think that's your way home there" I say pointing to it.
"Yeah, I've had enough of the Mushroom Kingdom." He says walking into it.
"Seeya back in the real world!" He says. I walk up another flight of stairs that appear. There's another letter. It reads
"Dear Justin,

Heh, you seem to be able to get past my son, but there's just six more of my sons left!




Good luck, Puny!
King Koopa (A.K.A. Bowser)"
"If he were right here, I'd say 'Hey! Cram a sock in it, Koopa!', 'Cause I HATE being called puny." I say walking forward. All of a sudden there's another letter, it reads:
"P.S.
I forgot this so I have someone to kill IF they get through this hot desert.

Koopa"
There was a water bottle filled with almost freezing water. I pick it up. I start juggling it in my hands from the cold.
"Wow, that's SOME cold water! Probably the only thing HE'D give me." Up ahead, there was a blinding light. I walk into it, the Mushroom Kingdom turned into a dry desert
"Awww man. I HATE the sun! " I say walking forward, I drink some of the water, and you know what? NO water left the bottle, yet, I got water in my mouth.
"Man, this is some preeeeeety cold and good water, how nice of him." I say looking at the bottle. All of a sudden, I see that no water was drank from that. My eyes widen. I start doing the moonwalk.
"Sweet! I love this water! It doesn't leave the bottle!" I start running to "Level 1-World 2" There's a spiky, I jump over it to bash a block, a Super Mushroom comes up. I touch it, then I grow to my favorite size. four red-shelled Koopas come, I stomp one, pick up the shell and throw it at the others. I jump onto a pipe, I fall down it, I smash to the floor in an underground room. It was a coin room. I pick up all of the coins. I go back up in another pipe. I come up the next, A Lakitu was waiting there. I run FAST jumping over ANYTHING that gets in my way. I get nailed in the back by a spiky
"AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I scream, for one of the spikes cut my back severely. I shrink down to normal size. I pull out the water bottle, I pour some water on the wound. I get angry all of a sudden, I smash a box and up comes a starman. I grab it, jump ontop of a pile of blocks, jump up, and kick the Lakitu right in the face. He dies, the starman wore off just as I got to the stairs. I jump up the stairs, get the flag, and walk into the mini castle. Warp pipe time! I jump into the warp pipe, I FLY down it
"WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I squeal. I shoot out of the next pipe and smash my face into an item box above I get up and ask:
"Why do I always smash my face into something whenever I complete a level?" I touch the wound on my back, sure enough, it's still there, and it still stings. I look ahead, suddenly, it goes SM64 style, with the theme too. And strangley, I'm at Peach's castle. I walk towards the front doors, they were bashed down, I walk inside, The place was ransacked.
"Wow, what klutz did this? And what's this? One of Koopa's scales." I said sounding like a detective. I see one of the paintings. In the frame, there was another letter before I read it, I said:
"How come there are SO MANY LETTERS???" I picked it up and it read:
"Dear Mario, Please come to the castle, I have baked a cake for you.


Princess Toadstool,
Peach."
"Wait, that's from SM64. It's not for me" I say. I flip it over, there's another letter. A pointless one saying:
"DON'T DO IT MARIO!!! THE CAKE IS A LIEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!"
"Heh, wait WHAT??? I SAID THAT!!!" I say looking like this O_e.
"I guess Bowser broke in and kidnapped the Princess, Mario, and Luigi here." I say. I walk into one of the rooms, in there, sure enough, is a painting.
I jump into one of the paintings. Bomb-Omb Battlefield. Standing by the beginning, is a Bomb-Omb Buddy. I walk up to him, I say.
"Hey, you. Has Bowser come by here?" The Bomb-Omb turns to me. It asks:
"Yes, why?" I answer:
"Well, you better look out for other Bomb-Ombs, they are MORE explosive now!" The Bomb-Omb Buddy warns. I start off my quest through Bomb-Omb Battlefield. A Bomb-Omb gets near me. I start to run, but then, I realise that it's faster than me, so I pick it up, TOO LATE THOUGH. I hear it beeping. I yell:
"WHAT THE FU-" BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM. All of a sudden, I see a life meter show up, I had three life bars taken away. Then, another Bomb-Omb comes, I pick it up, whip it a a Goomba, then it dissappears in the explosion.I walk up a slope, there, coming at me, is a Chain Chomp. I dive out of the way. I then go accross a bridge. Up the mountain dodging each ball, there, at the top, stands the Bom-Omb King. He's facing the edge, he turns around to me. He starts laughing.
"YOU'RE the hero??? AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!" He falls over on the ground. I look dissappointed.
"Forget this." I say picking him up. I throw him forward.
"WOAH!! WHAT THE? HOW DID YOU DO THAT?? Well, I suppose I should tell you where Bowser went." He went through the snow world. That's all I know." He says before he dissappears. The succces music starts. I go back to the castle. The same castle music music starts. I walk into the room with the snow world painting. I end up in the snow world (Stop castle music). I look around the snowy world. It's a little chilly. I zip up my jacket. Then, I can hear the music starts. I start walking, I stop at a puddle with a penguin in it.
"I know her from SM64!" I say in my head.
"Hey, you! Kid in the brown jacket and beanie! I need your help!" She says. I walk over to her.
"Yayesh? What's the problem?" I ask.
"Bowser scattered my babies all accross this world!" She says.
"I'll find em', but would you know where Bowser went?" I say.
"I would tell you now," She yawns.
"But, I spent all day looking for them. I'll tell you after you find them." She says before she starts taking a nap. I start off looking for them.
"I know one is above the lodge. So I'll go there first." I jump up on the lodge, then, sure enough, the penguin is there. I walk over to it. It says:
"I want my mommy! "
"That's why I came to get you. I met your mom, I'm finding you for her." I said. I pick him up. I struggle getting him up off the ground.
"I see you're eating more than me!" I say in a struggling voice.
"Why not you follow me then?" I say putting him down. We walk to the penguin's mother.
"Mommy! " He says. His mother wakes up. The baby waddles up and hugs her.
"Aww, that's cute." I say. I go to find another one. I walk to the bridge,
"Oh right, it's SUPPOSED to be out. I'll just leap accross it." I say taking a HUGE leap from one end to the other. Around the corner, there's a small cave that the bridge goes into. In the back, is another little penguin. She looks up at me and says:
"Are you my mommy?" I explain that I'm not her mother and that I was there to return her to her mother. She follows me. Once we got to the mother, I say:
"Only one left to go." The little penguin returns to her mother. I jump over the lodge and walk toward a mountain. At the foot at the mountain, there's a baby penguin crying. It seemed extra light. It looks up and says:
"I want my mommy!" I explain that I'm there to save him. I ask:
"Do you feel comfortable with me picking you up?"
"I don't mind you picking me up." He says. So I pick him up. I run to his mother, place him on the ground. He waddles to his mom.
"Thank you, Justin! Thank you! I can tell you where Bowser went now." She says.
"That wretched demon went through the Thwomp Fort, that's all I know." She says. The succcess music starts. I return to the castle. The castle music starts.
"Ugh. I'm TIRED. Oh hey look a convenient little Hammok over there!" I say pointing to a hammok in a corner. I look outside, it's dark. I lie down in the hammok. I fall into a deep sleep, (Turn off castle music). (End lullaby) I suddenly get up in front of Bowser's castle (Fortress Music) I walk towards it. There's a bridge over a moat of lava.
"I better look out for the lava." I say. I walk casualy around it. I walk towards the edge to look into the bubbling lava. All of a sudden, a fireball comes up. I move my head back so I don't get my face fried off.
"Note to self: Don't look into lava." I say. I reach the door, look at it like it's trying to put up a challenge. I punch it open. I didn't even feel my fist bashing the door open. I walk in, the entryway looks much like Hogwart's. (Harry Potter lol) I walk up the stairs, at the top, there's a huge door. I open it, in there, is none other than Bowser. He breaths fire at me. I run out of the way. I run up to punch him. he grabs me by the arm and spins me around. Tosses me up. I nail the ceiling REAL hard. I fall back down. Trying to get up. I back away from Giga Bowser. I breaths fire everywhere. I dodge all of the fireballs. He jumps high. I just dash right under him. I was about a stone's throat from his tail. I hit the button (End music). He falls into the lava. I watch him burn. The last time he comes up. A key flies out from his hand. I pick it up, use it on the door. Ahead appears none other than the great hero himself. Mario. I stare at him in awe. He doesn't move. All of a sudden, I see that he has red eyes. He turns toward me, an army of red-eyed Toads follow him. he picks me up and hurls me into the lava. Just as I touch the lava. I wake up shocked.
"HOLY CRAP! NIGHTMARE! NIGHTMARE!" I yell. I look out the window, it's morning (Morning Music) I look up to the sun. Preparing for a new day. I pick up my beanie from the floor, put it on, and walk into the Thwomp's Fortress painting. I jump into it. Then I find myself falling to the ground. Faceplant! I get up and say
"Well, looks nice. Oh great, Thwomps." i walk up the slope, out of the wall, shoots out a stone bar, the thing whams me in the side, shooting me off, I smash into the ground, I get up, walk up the slope again, and jump over each one, when it came to the moving platforms, I did a long jump on each one. When it was time for the Thwomp, I ran under it, I moved my foot just in time, for the Thwomp nearly crushed it. i jump up the steps, I run under the next, there, sleeping, is a Pirahna Plant, I sneak by, take the route of the falling bridge, and then comes the spinning bridge,
"Oh great, my favorrrrrite part" I say with sarcasm, surprisingly I make it to the center without falling off, the bridge starts turning, I run to the other side, around a corner, is a Whomp, I approach it, it looks at me and attempts to crush me, I walk around to the side of it, punch the back, and the thing bursts into bits, around another corner, is another Whomp, the same thing happens, as i run to the elevator, I say
"I can't wait to go on one of THE-" WHANG, I get nailed in the face by one of the platforms, I get up and say
"I'm ok......" and fall over. After about 5 minutes down, I get up and grab onto the platform, at the top, is none other than King Whomp, he says in a deep voice,
"Heh heh heh, if you think you're going to get THIS Power Star, Mario-"
"Umm, newsflash, idiot, I'm not Mario. Look, I'm wearing a brown beanie, and a brown jacket, not a red cap, and overalls, plus, I'm shorter" I interupt.
"Enough with the talk, let's fight." I continue. King Whomp runs to me and tries to splatter me, I jump up over him on the ground, and ground pound him, he gets up, picks me up and whips me at the ground, I roll over just as he tries to smash me. I get up and ground pound him the second time. He gets up and tries to swing his arm at me. He falls over face first. I ground pound him a third time. He stays face in the ground and says
"Agghh, you got me! You still don't thank us for walking on us, what do you want?" I say to him:
"I want to know where Bowser went."
"Heh, you're never going to find out where, NEVER" He answers, I punch him in the back.
"AGH! OKAY OKAY!! HE WENT PAST DANK DARK CAVE!!!" He screams. Then bursts into pieces.
"Dank Dark Cave.... DIDN'T I MAKE THAT UP?" I said.
"I guess I have to make up how to get to it." I said. I start thinking. The basement.... Behind the Toad down there. So next thing, I jump out of the painting. And I run down to the basement, ignoring Big Boo. I run past the Toad saying
"Can talk now bye!" and into the wall. I then start falling down a shaft, I land by a bridge, I look down the side of the bridge and down the deeeeeep cavern below, there's a rock, then a rectangular hole in it, I jump into the hole, I just keep falling. Then I imagine a floor. Next thing you know, I land perfectly, then I imagine a shaft, in front of me is a mining shaft, I jump down it, then I imagine the ring where the Big Bomb-Omb Bro is, I imagine the Big Bomb-Omb Bro. There standing in front of me. Is a HUGE Bomb-Omb Bro. He says in a deep voice:
"I will CRUSH you, puny!!" I reply back saying:
"Oh yeah, you and what are me?" The Bomb-Omb Bro takes out a huge Bomb-Omb.
"Oh... That are me............... RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!" I scream. I imagine a bridge to the other side of the ring and a tunnel to the painting of Bowser. The Bomb-Omb Bro follows, I imagine that the bridge dissappears just as he steps foot on it, just as I feel his hand get my back, I turn around, I see him fall into the lava below. My eyes widen when I see him take out a huge Bomb-Omb, I run to the painting, jump in JUST as it goes off in the lava, a huge explosion destroys the entire Ring. I jump into the painting with the picture of Bowser and an army of Bomb-Ombs marching in front of him, I fall down onto another ring. I look around it, it's a round, high cavern, and from behind a group of rocks, I hear Kookie Koopa. He gives out one of his evil laughs and says:
"If you SERIOUSLY think you're going to find my dad here, you can think again!!" and laughs again. All of a sudden, I see Kookie with a Drilling Ray.
"Wow, I guess you Koopas have future technology! Too bad I'm too powerful for THAT." I say daringly. Kookie laughs again.
"But this thing is too powerful for YOU!!" As he laughs, he shoots a ray at me, I do a front roll out of the way. Run up to him, and trip him. He drops the gun, it breaks into pieces.
"NOO!! MY RAY GUN!! IT'S DESTROYED!! YOU WILL PAY!!!" Kookie rages and charges for me, he jumps up, and takes a bit out of my arm with his sharp tooth. I pull him off, whip him at one of the walls. He gets up and says:
"And I've got your friend, who I'm not afraid to drop him into this DEEEEEEEEP shaft!!" Then lowers a cage with Jake in it above a huge, wide shaft. Jake says:
"JUSTIN!? I thought you were Mario!" I reply:
"Nope, I'm going to SAVE Mario though!" Kookie butts in saying:
"AND TOO BAD YOU'RE NOT!!" And lowers the cage, I dive to Kookie, hold him on the ground, he screams:
"This is blasphmy!! This is MADNESS!!!" I reply saying:
"Madness? THIS IS SPARTAAAAAA!!!!!" and shove him off the edge and into the huge shaft, I wave to him. I then swing the cage to the side of the shaft, then let go of the rope. The cage goes flying into a wall, the cage breaks, Jake lands unharmed, he says:
"Is it ok if i hang at Peach's Castle considering that you spoke about saving Mario?"



To Be Continued....

lol nice work....like the idea as well

haha thats heaps good! cant wait til the next 1

(05-19-2009 10:14 PM)Pocket Rocket Wrote:  haha thats heaps good! cant wait til the next 1

Well, now there's two MORE heaps of goodness!

I like this. And I have 1 question. Are we allowed to post a story from Nintendoland? So you know I'm talking about a story I wrote.

Sure! I'm sure the guys at Nintendo Land would appreciate if it isn't someone else's though; don't steal. Have fun . I don't know why I said have fun lol.

BAWUMP.

Does anyone even care about this thread anymore??